Start, but expect to come back

As promised, I have sent my agent a synopsis and first three chapters of a possible sequel to the latest novel.  It needed to be done, and it is done, but as I have said, it’s not something I feel I’m particularly good at. Those three chapters in particular… They do...

Synopsis

You want to pitch a book to someone in the industry who already has an idea of the kind of thing you do.  They’ve read the first in your series, and they’ve asked, ‘Is there a sequel?’ The good news is you probably won’t have to write the...

Write What You Can Bluff

My wife and I spent the last fortnight cycling around Rajasthan with a couple of tour guides and a group of other Brits, all very lovely people. I had confessed early on that I was a writer, and my fellow travelers were interested. I was asked several times if I was...

The Rule of Magic

Right, settle in.  Let’s talk about Magic. For this purpose, we’ll define it broadly. ‘Magic’ means anything that works or happens in your written world that cannot, according to our understanding of science, work or happen in the real one. It means dragons that fly...

Reader’s reports

My draft manuscript has been to my favourite readers.  Their reactions, in brief: Reader 1 said she needed to know more about how the magic worked; Reader 2 thought the first part was too slow; Reader 3 said he couldn’t tell until he was some way into the book what...

Landscape

The setting of your novel is as much a character as any of the actors in your story. It drives the action just as they do. It deserves at least as much attention from the writer. Well, I think so. The word “setting” covers many things. If you are writing...

To Cut or to Keep?

It’s a nice scene.  It takes place at dawn, when the grasses are thick with dew.  Under a cedar tree two sisters are discussing things that have happened, and why their world is as it is.  We learn a bit about one of the sisters from the way she reacts.  It It’s...

First Lines

“She was young to know such of life, and how to end it.” Does that work? As a first line, is it intriguing, or just pompous? Does it pull the reader in or put them off? To hell with it! What I have written, I have written: the first edit of my second...

Stepping Back

The End. I’ve written those words again.  I’ve unwound the thread of my story all the way to its finish.  The next thing is to look it over to see what more needs doing, and what needs doing differently. It’s a mental adjustment.  I’ve been living with this thing for...

Into the Woods

My heroine is feeling her way through woods at night. So am I. She knows where she is.  She knows where she needs to get to.  The way is dark. She is groping with her fingers and toeing forward with bare feet. The path is muddy, stony, brambly.  It leads downhill. Her...

Cycle of Emotions

Marite, a student in Mexico, once asked me if I went through an endless chain of emotions while writing. I don’t know.  Do I? Surely I do! I am an artist! I should be endlessly consumed by the emotions!  I should be a seething, nay, gibbering mass of creativity, my...

Beachcombing

All right, I admit it.  I did. I stole from someone else’s novel. I had been reading a retelling of the Arthur story.  I wasn’t thinking a great deal about it, except the usual “I wouldn’t have done it like that” thoughts that authors often think when reading someone...