Why you shouldn’t write your sequel

Going back to that sequel: the one I had pledged to my agent without any idea what was going to happen in it. I know why the industry likes sequels. A reader who has enjoyed the first book will want to read the second.  Unlike the first time around, they have a good...

Video

This is a new departure for me. I am making a video. The video is of one of my short stories, The Curse of the Ferryman.  The plan is to release it on social media to promote myself as a writer. (Cunning, eh?)  But also it’s an experiment with live storytelling...

Start, but expect to come back

As promised, I have sent my agent a synopsis and first three chapters of a possible sequel to the latest novel.  It needed to be done, and it is done, but as I have said, it’s not something I feel I’m particularly good at. Those three chapters in particular… They do...

Synopsis

You want to pitch a book to someone in the industry who already has an idea of the kind of thing you do.  They’ve read the first in your series, and they’ve asked, ‘Is there a sequel?’ The good news is you probably won’t have to write the...

Write What You Can Bluff

My wife and I spent the last fortnight cycling around Rajasthan with a couple of tour guides and a group of other Brits, all very lovely people. I had confessed early on that I was a writer, and my fellow travelers were interested. I was asked several times if I was...

The Rule of Magic

Right, settle in.  Let’s talk about Magic. For this purpose, we’ll define it broadly. ‘Magic’ means anything that works or happens in your written world that cannot, according to our understanding of science, work or happen in the real one. It means dragons that fly...

Reader’s reports

My draft manuscript has been to my favourite readers.  Their reactions, in brief: Reader 1 said she needed to know more about how the magic worked; Reader 2 thought the first part was too slow; Reader 3 said he couldn’t tell until he was some way into the book what...

Landscape

The setting of your novel is as much a character as any of the actors in your story. It drives the action just as they do. It deserves at least as much attention from the writer. Well, I think so. The word “setting” covers many things. If you are writing...

How Long It Takes

Lauren once asked me how long it takes to write a book.  Someone had told her “two years.” It takes as long as you take to write it, Lauren. This will depend on several things. How long is the book? My shortest to date is 40,000 words.  My longest is...

To Cut or to Keep?

It’s a nice scene.  It takes place at dawn, when the grasses are thick with dew.  Under a cedar tree two sisters are discussing things that have happened, and why their world is as it is.  We learn a bit about one of the sisters from the way she reacts.  It It’s...

First Lines

“She was young to know such of life, and how to end it.” Does that work? As a first line, is it intriguing, or just pompous? Does it pull the reader in or put them off? To hell with it! What I have written, I have written: the first edit of my second...